New Assignment

So, as I said yesterday, my pups are being fractious. I thought I could just write Wolf Lake fic and be happy, but my Boukun pups are not going for that. So, since I have no fucking idea what I did wrong at Boukun, I am going to reset Boukun.

How did this happen???

My boss.

Last night, she had five friends over, and I cooked. Then she showed them my old writing stuff. Two of them used to write fan fic, it was how they started. They drank a lot of wine, and then challenged me to reset and redo Boukun better. Obviously, it is locked, and it is for a select audience. However, these are professional writers who have no qualms about telling me what they really think.

They gave me suggestions, of course, and one was that Roma needed to be Roman. A grandson had a different edge to it. It was tough, but I can see it. Also, they liked the idea of both twins being there.

So, I have my assignment and task. Not for public consumption. But wouldn't it be funny if Boukun became a show? Hmmmm...let the plot bunnies run wild.

Seriously?

GROW UP!

It was a fucking compliment!

Here is the one I was going to add today, before you blocked me from commenting.

"I wanted to clarify, what exactly I thought was so lovely. You have an extrordinary gift with anticipation and timing. I knew what the ending would be, as, obviously, it was natural. But I enjoyed the story to there, and I wasn't feeling like, yadayada, okay, yeah...I was savoring it to the end. That shows your incredible gift of timng and building to the end. You have always had that gift. Hsu's recent Watcher story had that. I was on the edge waiting for violence, but it did not happen, and I felt relief, then the end left an edge like a razor, because it could blow up any time. Your timing is a real gift."

Wow, I am such a fucking bitch.

Big girl panties, Jaye...sold everywhere. Get some.